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Oct 11 07 8:12 PM
| QUOTE (Rorien @ August 29, 2007 05:15 am) |
I've been noticing this a bit lately too, though I haven't been editing excessively. I find I spend the first chapter or so of a new novel noticing little things I never had before - an unusual word used multiple times, for example (unless insouciant is common and I've been living in a hole in the ground), or something that I would have punctuated or phrased differently. If the story is sound, however, I'll get sucked in, regardless of the number of adjectives. |
Lol, I suppose you have a point, when the books good I just dont notice, though as I said earlier, I don't see many good books lately. Not to say there's none, just less.