I hope I'm not breaking any rules by posting this link -- the moderators can remove my post if it is in violation of the rules. But since I learned of Robyn Opie's course on Fiction Factor, and since she is moderator of one of the forums here, I'm assuming it is ok to post this:
http://www.robynopie.com/showdonttellstudypack.htmlThat link takes you to the study pack. However, the course I took equates to the mentored course that is mentioned at the very bottom of the page -- Robyn gave feedback, constructive criticism, etc. She SHOWED me "Show, Don't Tell" by her critiques of my writing. I think the mentoring is what made the difference, helped me "get it."