I've been fiddling with your suggestions, and trying not to let my self write outside my own tape and red flags. It gets tempting, but I making some slow pr ogress. Thanks for your imput.
It's odd how you sometimes think that these problems only happen to you, and yet here it's just the common every day plague that a writer go's through.
For the love of writing.
I'm trying to get acustomed to the "What if" game. It's kind of hard because it opens the door to "Change". I grew up writing this story and through the years it evolved with me I suppose even so I still hate change. I better learn to like it or live with it.
I think I love my characters more than my plot. Seems a little shameful to me, but my characters are demanding creatures.
Thanks again. Wow, I need to check the forum more offten.