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Oct 20 10 5:00 PM

If you're writing in first person, I'd be very wary of switching viewpoints over to a different character. This will not seem natural if the rest of the book is told in first person of the protagonist, only to switch to the inside-thoughts of a different character.

This may work from third person limited, or you have the option of the viewpoint character noticing various body language signals or characteristics of the other character from that primary viewpoint. Don't confuse them though.

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