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Sep 20 10 12:48 AM

AzraelSakura,

First, welcome to the Fiction Factor forum!

Honestly, you're the only one who can decide which route is the 'best' one for your story.

That said, there is no reason that the POV character can't pick up through conversation, actions, what others say, think and cofide, and make reasonable statements or assumptions on what the second character is thinking. Will he be right all the time? No...but that's okay, isn't it?

We live our lives in first person POV. Yet we judge what others we are close to feel or think--based on words, actions, nonverbal cues, history/experience, what others reveal to us about the person in question, etc.

I've written and had works published in both first person POV and third person limited. I agree that some stories are better told in one or the other, so good luck with whatever route you choose.

R-Tech

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