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May 30 08 1:41 AM

"phoenix" being a bird implies a kind of evolution, which may not fit with the themes you want to adress, where a plain dragon implies more like stagnation. If the spirit is truly reborn, than a phoenix would work better.

And the river of the mind runs free
Leaves nought in its wake but serenity
From a slient spring of transluscent sheen
Slip silver songs of crystal carved
By the hand of water's queen