Ilasir Maroa Interact My Recent Posts Posts: 163 #1 [url] May 30 08 1:41 AM "phoenix" being a bird implies a kind of evolution, which may not fit with the themes you want to adress, where a plain dragon implies more like stagnation. If the spirit is truly reborn, than a phoenix would work better. And the river of the mind runs freeLeaves nought in its wake but serenityFrom a slient spring of transluscent sheenSlip silver songs of crystal carved By the hand of water's queen Quote Reply Forum Jump Introductions Writing Discussion The Writer's Life Characters Writing Scams Editors & Agents Topics Writing Children's Books Sci-Fi and Fantasy Horror Flash Fiction Book Promotion Announcements Website Spotlight Writing Links Market Listings Writing Contests Writing Exercises Suggestion Box To the Webmaster... Exalted Moderator's Group--and Admin. :p Add Reply Quick Reply bbcode help Use Smilies (Complete smilies list) Convert URLs Subscribe to this topic Preview Quick Reply